Wednesday, November 25, 2009

Halki Si Hassi

Well I am writing this poem from a period of 6 months...first i wrote it till 6th line, but alwaz felt it was incoplete..now i have updated it n wanted everybdy to read and ponder about its essence on our life....read it n post your comments.....

Halki Si Hassi

Halki Si hassi hotoo per aati hai, to dilke sath zinadagi bhi mehkati hai

Halki si hassi jab kaano mein padti hai, to mann ke taaro ko chedd jati hai

Halki si hassi jab aapne pankh phad-phaddti hai, to aankho mein chamak aa jati hai

Halki si hassi jab unki yaad aati hai, tab woh jeena sikha jaaati hai

Halki si hassi jab thodi si khushi de jati hai, to zindagi se apni koi shikayat nahi reh jati hai

Yehi halki si hassi jab aansuo mein badal jati hai, to apne sath sapno ko bhi baha le jati hai

yehi hassi jab rassta bhatak jati hai, to har lamhe mein bas khamoshi hi nazar aati hai

Apni hassi ko dhundhna chahti hoon, apni zindagi ko dhundhna chahti hoon, apne aap to dhundhana chahti hoon
pata nahi bas andhere mein bhatak kerkyon reh jati hoon
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6 comments:

  1. UnknownNovember 25, 2009 at 4:58 AM

    Hi Divya Really a nice poem...Keep Writing

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  2. DiviNovember 25, 2009 at 10:32 AM

    Thanx Abhinav....n thanx for being first follower of my blog on the very first day of its existenz....:)

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  3. UnknownNovember 25, 2009 at 11:23 AM

    I read the first line nd Dozed off... lolz...

    Acchi hai... cud b better... :)

    I never crossed the first line... ;)

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  4. CharuNovember 25, 2009 at 8:54 PM

    Hey ... never knew the poetess in you.

    Keep writing!

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  5. DiviNovember 25, 2009 at 9:08 PM

    @charu : Thanx a lot buddy.

    @deepak: hey atleast mention ur last name or anything to identify wch deepak u r..out of the pool of deepaks i know.

    Thanx for the hosla afzayi ppl....will sure keep writing.

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  6. UnknownNovember 25, 2009 at 9:10 PM

    kuul yaar, chupa hua talent. achcha laga dekh kr ki mere friend circle mai kisi main to ye hobey hai.

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